Hello Kay-Brieanna! I thought this was a very good blog post. I just think you should make some more characters playing the game. maybe they could be running?
Kia ora Aaliyah. How great that you got some feedback already! I agree, I like the look of your project. It reminds me of when I watched baseball in the USA. My main tip would be to make sure you get your message about quality blog posts in your project.
Hi Kay-brieanna I like the way you used the cat to encourage the person using the bat.Did you think about making it a bit longer? Next time, you could try and add some more commandsHow long did it take you to make it? From Noah
Hi Kay-brieanna I liked how they were showing collaboration maybe you could make it a bit longer. Did you think about them trying to wack the ball and not giving up? From Noah!
Hello Kay-Brieanna!
ReplyDeleteI thought this was a very good blog post. I just think you should make some more characters playing the game. maybe they could be running?
thank you for the feedback.
DeleteI'll add more characters.
Maybe I will add a airplane.
thank you for you feedback.
okay! and your welcome!
DeleteKia ora Aaliyah. How great that you got some feedback already! I agree, I like the look of your project. It reminds me of when I watched baseball in the USA. My main tip would be to make sure you get your message about quality blog posts in your project.
ReplyDeleteHi Kay-brieanna I like the way you used the cat to encourage the person using the bat.Did you think about making it a bit longer? Next time, you could try and add some more commandsHow long did it take you to make it? From Noah
ReplyDeleteHi Kay-Brieanna,
ReplyDeleteI like the scratch project.
Isn't it meant to be on blog commenting?
From Anna @ new Windsor school
Hi Kay-brieanna I liked how they were showing collaboration maybe you could make it a bit longer. Did you think about them trying to wack the ball and not giving up?
ReplyDeleteFrom Noah!
I really like but maybe next time make it longer!
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